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Posts about “Be Home By Dinner”, my first novel.

Using Social Media Followers To Determine The Best Book Cover

In designing the cover for Be Home By Dinner, I came up with eight different variations. As the story spans fifteen years, there were a lot of ideas and metaphoric imagery that seemed to work. After whittling it down to three variations, I decided to present the options to my social media friends and followers on Facebook, Instagram and Twitter and have them vote on the best one. The results were alarming. Of 115 votes:

  • Pixel Duo = 3 votes
  • Fireworks Table = 26 votes
  • Cassettes = 86 votes

My favorite was the “Pixel Duo”. This included a pixilated couple standing in front of trees that were covered in toilet paper, a world of mischief at their backs. As hiding within the veil of 8-bit video game graphics is a constant in the book, I felt that this was a strong image to reveal the setting, tone and period. I didn’t even question it until I let people vote. Comments came in that the toilet paper didn’t seem visible and that the pixilated couple was confusing.

pixel people with toilet paper treese
“Pixel Duo” cover

“Fireworks Table” was my second favorite, which featured a deteriorating white table with ladyfingers, smoke bombs, a golf ball and hints of fingerprinted blood. Although these items were important elements of the book, it seemed too busy and didn’t translate well when at a small “thumbnail” size, which is how most initially view book covers in the online world.

fireworks and golf ball on table with blood
“Fireworks Table”‘ cover

“Cassettes” featured an upright cassette with a stack of multicolored ones behind it, all with a hideous yellow and white felt textured wall as a background. The cheery nostalgia of the image made me equally cringe and grin. It seemed filthy, as if I could smell the second hand smoke emanating from the floral fabric.

cassettes on table behind floral felt wall paper
“Cassettes” cover

With “Cassettes” winning in a landslide, I thought more about the role of this hissing and easily deteriorating medium in the story. The device itself plays a critical role as a form of evidence and is a constant as music self-discovery unfolds. A mental “mix tape” occurs as well, which uplifts the protagonist to an ending he couldn’t fathom occurring. “Cassettes” was also was the easiest to read and identify at a smaller image scale.

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“Fireworks Table 2” cover

Above, I dabbled with adding a cassette image to the “Fireworks Table”, but it appeared even more crowded.

orange overlay via Photoshop layer effects
Final back cover full bleed image.

But the updated “Fireworks Table 2” image became an ideal back cover image, with the spine’s orange literally bleeding over it with a Photoshop Overlay layer effect. The gleeful colors of the front cover image came to an abrupt end on the back, where the table of objects appeared to be devices in a photography dark room. The antagonist’s “instaphotos” seem to linger nearby, something the reader eventually learns about.

sunset cover design
Sunset Road Cover

In a panic, I went to the drawing board and tried to find the perfect sunset image, an evergreen signal of the mandated curfews that the kids of Oreland obeyed. I felt certain, momentarily, that this was the way to go.

boy at pay phone
“Pay Phone” cover

I then considered an image of a boy at a payphone, which happens several times in the book with the protagonist. The image appeared too dreadful and not reflective of the entirety of the period covered in the story. It was too late 70s. I was just in love with the image. If I had unique imagery for each chapter title, this would have been perfect to use.

final cover design layout, utilizing Photoshop
Final back cover, spine and front cover

Finally, I happily settled on the above. The orange streak on the cassette, the color of warning, became the color of the spine and bled onto the back cover reveal of some devices of mischief.

Which one would did you like the best?

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Be Home By Dinner – Chapter 1: Initial Taste

October ’78

I sat on the curb at the end of the walkway, tapping my sneakers onto Redford Road, staring at the rainbow sheen of leaked motor oil. Star Wars figures stood propped up against the lawn edging with weapons in hand. Behind me, the walkway led to the front screen door where I saw Mom attending to my feverish sister. Dad was at a bank, cashing a check. I was 4-years-old.

My family had recently moved to Oreland, West Oreland to be exact, or White City as the original generation dubbed it. The rectangular cookie cutter homes were constructed shortly after WWII, all painted white.

The perimeter of my front lawn universe was the curb at the street, tall hedges to the right and bushes to the left. My parents allowed me to roam free within these boundaries, a realm of azaleas, scattered toys, a tall pine and skittish squirrels.

From the lawn, I could see several homes, all occupied by retired grandparents. They often worked on gardening projects with meticulous precision. Many were veterans that purchased their homes with the help of the G.I. Bill.

The Finns lived across the street. They drank cider on a fancy tree swing and waved at me as I made battle sound effects with my mouth. Mr. Finn sported a feather in his hat with a cardigan sweater. Mrs. Finn wore a bonnet with a shawl. They swung hand in hand.

“Garvey, what’re ya gonna be for Halloween tomorrow?” Mr. Finn called out.

I ignored him and looked back at Mom. She was spoon feeding something to my sister, Siobhan.

The Finns stood up and walked to their front door, waving me over. Mrs. Finn shivered, rubbing her upper arms with her hands to warm up. “Do you like British biscuits?” she called out.

“What is that?” I asked.

“They’re kind’ve like cookies. Superb. Come over and have some.”

I thought about how Dad spoke of Mr. Finn as a good guy, an American war hero.

The wind whooshed through yellowing leaves, revealing their lighter colored bottoms. Clouds raced by the sun, as if someone was toggling a dimmer switch, their shadows gliding over the street. I stood up, looked both ways and leaped into the street toward the widening smiles of the Finns. Glancing back, I didn’t see Mom through the screen door anymore. The glare of the TV lit up Siobhan’s glum freckled face. Sweaty blond bangs laid heavy on her forehead.

Inside the Finn household, I took a seat on a stiff sofa. Mr. Finn sat on a wingback chair and turned on the TV.  â€śYa know, Oreland is exactly as named. A land of ore,” Mr. Finn said, tapping his cane. “Iron ore. American iron ore was made into steel to make aircraft so we could bomb the Nazis.”

“Oh, please,” cried Mrs. Finn. “Now’s not that time for that. Have some biscuits, boys.”

“Well, it’s true. We need to educate our youth. America produced the most in ’45.”

Mrs. Finn shook her head and put a tray of assorted beige delectables in front of us. I grabbed one with a jelly dot on it. Mr. Finn put on a PBS show called All Creatures Great And Small.

The living room decor included intricate framed paintings, plush pillows, ceramic figurines, and doilies. A variety of clocks ticked and chimed. The Finns stared at me with glazed eyes and grins, somehow comforted by my sloppy chomps and crumbs falling from my mouth. Their white fluffy cat sat on a puffy bed.

I watched the show and peered out the window, waiting to see if Mom was looking for me. I darted my eyes from television frame to window frame, back and forth.

“You’re allowed over here, right?” asked Mrs. Finn.

“Yeah, I am,” I said.

“Garvey Nolan, are you certain?”

Dad drove up to the side of our house in his green Volkswagen Beetle. He got out with a couple boxes of pizza. He headed up the walkway to the front door. He put the pizzas down and ran about our yard, peeking in bushes, arms out in a panic. He rushed to the curb and looked up and down the road, stroking his black mustache and adjusting his thick plastic glasses.

The excitement of doing something devastatingly wrong brought out a rush in me I had never experienced. But the sheer suffering on Dad’s face was difficult to endure. I burst off the sofa and ran out of the Finn house, screaming out to Dad. He saw me, dropped to his knees and put his hands together as if he was praying.

“Look both ways first before crossing!” Dad hollered.

My feet were a couple steps into the road. A blur of a yellow car whizzed by with the horn held down, like a large lemon taffy being stretched. Leaves and dust whirled about. I looked both ways and crossed. Dad stared down the yellow car that sat idling at a stop sign in the distance. The driver side window rolled down. The sound of heavy sobbing and fists pounding on the dashboard emanated from the window. The driver said something about a wife.

“Garv, stay right here,” said Dad, pointing to our walkway. He ran after the yellow car, shouting words I knew were naughty and only for grownups. The yellow car, a small sporty breed, screeched off when Dad got close.

“Couldn’t get his plate numbers,” said Dad, jogging back. “This is why you look both ways. Crazy cockroach. I’ve seen this car before. Keeps going 40 down our road.”

Dad pulled out a folded Polaroid photo from his back pocket and put it in front of me. “This is him,” he said. “A speeder. I’ll get him someday. Oreland is not a shortcut to anything. This is no cut through town. People that live here don’t drive like that.” The photo had a blur of the yellow car passing by our house with an arm extended out of a partially rolled-down window. The middle finger was up like a flagpole waiting to be adorned.

Mr. Finn jogged out, holding his hat. “Tornado warning!” he cried. “It scrolled on the bottom of my TV.”

Blustering wind tossed gravel at my face. I squinted. Mom raced from neighboring front yards. Her blond hair bounced as her apron flung off. “There you are! Where did you go?” she asked.

The sky was sea-foam green. “I’m sorry. I was—”

Trashcan lids whizzed along the lawn. Dad picked me up and carried me over his shoulders. I watched Mom’s red painted toenails follow as we raced inside.

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